poemranker ::Reap by ecargo

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Free verse № 136977

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Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jan 2006 · Edited 15 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

In this hollow, a bird-beat; thin ribbon pulses red as harvest, red as heat. Sickle cleaves sky, time, tide: an egg, an eye. Dust haze wavers, lays its wreathe on husks, cracked tamarisk where night wraiths feed. We wait the dead hours, sickle cleaves sky, knife-edged, wandering beneath red eye.

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[6] Dovina 16-Jan-06/6:10 AM Reply
I see a rural harvest time in a hollow, but miss the point, if it's more than that.
[n/a] ecargo › Dovina 16-Jan-06/5:32 PM Reply
More mood than meaning.
[9] zodiac 17-Jan-06/10:14 AM Reply
This is really great, biteme. My only suggestion: wreathe should be wreath.