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Free verse № 13754

untitled

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Approach with no control and let the scene form its emotion. face to face with contention. acknowledge with regard. be convincing. cradle their fragile ego with subservient poise and spit. split personality disorder. the sunshine glazes my name tag with business excrement. dying faces with dying lives force fetal composure with one finger up and two fingers crossed.

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[9] Shardik 4-Dec-03/10:23 AM Reply
Do I know you? Darby?
[n/a] darby pyn › Shardik 15-Dec-03/9:20 PM Reply
I go by scubasteve on another site.
[n/a] Bachus › darby pyn 17-Dec-03/12:11 PM Reply
Oh, no wonder, so do I.
[9] blindwriter 3-Apr-05/11:06 PM Reply
genius.