poemranker ::Singularity by drnick

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Free verse № 137602

Singularity

Member since 2005 · Posted 26 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

You Cut me and we watched it bleed Pretended like you didn't see Out pour insecurities Took a while though I was brief Look I can't have you climin' trees Looking down and laughing at me I cry inside and hardly breathe You're my lovely little allergy So What's it like to be the thief Take away my stars and dreams The center of my galaxy Just another of your abductees Sad Always have to have the lead I'd give you that and more for free Save you from the worst disease All I need is singularity

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3 comments

[8] zodiac 26-Jan-06/10:13 AM Reply
Sorry, couldn't get into it.
[n/a] drnick › zodiac 26-Jan-06/1:24 PM Reply
Shouldn't you have given me a lower score then?
[8] zodiac › drnick 26-Jan-06/1:56 PM Reply
No, not really.