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Inoperative Head Mechanism

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Feb 2006 · 2 comments

When they've surely said it all About how you never Ever Ever Speak your mind Tell them that yours Isn't nearly so close To your tongue

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[6] Dovina 4-Feb-06/8:01 AM Reply
Funny. The first line is wordy.
[7] Ranger 6-Feb-06/9:51 AM Reply
Yes, the thinker's comeback. Nice sharp ending.