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Free verse № 138301

MyEyes/Complicated

Member since 2006 · Posted 4 Feb 2006 · 1 comment

My eyes are full of pain, from you. My eyes cry every-night, because of this hatred. My eyes cried so much to make you stop. Turning time back, would of helped me stopped you hurting me. Complicated, that’s what this situation is ...Complicated. I hate you, I hate you, for what you’ve put me through. Why, if you were happy with her? Why did you have to hurt me? Those years, tore me up inside, mentally. Like maggots, feeding on fresh flesh. Yet unlike maggots not eating away the badness, Eating away on my goodness, innocence. Changing me, unconsciously. I don’t remember it, fucked up ain’t? But then again, Do I want to remember it? I don’t think I do. I wanna press rewind & record over it. Change what happened.

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[4] Angelicasassy 5-Feb-06/6:45 PM Reply
I have been there, trust me. This poem is a little confusing though.