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A Well Worth Wait

by savannah

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Sep 2002 · 17 comments

It took so long, But now we are together and, I know it will last forever, Not just a relationship but also a friendship that will grow on forever. We had such a good friendship, That I thought it would never become more. But later on I started to think about you all the time, And wish that we were more than just friends. I would imagine you holding me tight, I could just see you as being Mr. Right, Telling me everything would be o.k. And knowing you truly cared. I told you everything before, Except that I loved you. So now that we are finally together, I???ll start by telling you that??? I love you!!

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17 comments

[0] poetandknowit 9-Sep-02/10:48 PM Reply
Hey you and BARBIE have the same exact ending. And even have ?????????? all over the place. Oh well, can never say it enough: ???????I LOVE YOU TOO?????
[10] horus8 24-Sep-02/1:32 PM Reply
that's really neato. aren't we lucky.t
[6] Mutant_X 29-Sep-02/5:35 AM Reply
it's a good poem but there are alot of repeated words,like forever,friendship..etc!
[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> 10-Oct-02/1:25 PM Reply
i hope it was a double scoop of corned poop. fix your damn conjunctions for the love of jesu. this belongs on a sticky tab in his briefcase. not mocking my lonely masturbatory rituals 'pon my screen. you've crushed my loveless spleen. wench.
[10] Bachus 20-Oct-02/12:36 PM Reply
the questoion marks have to go, followed by tghe poem. out the window with the lot of it. too goody goody, and mushy without any balance. try tiger milk and some poe.
[10] ==Doylum 21-Oct-02/9:23 AM Reply
another sparkler i'm glad you've met that certain someone, and feel refreshed and happy to go forward to a finer day.
[6] cleverdevice 22-Oct-02/5:18 AM Reply
Nice and uncomplicated.
[7] debased 26-Oct-02/7:34 PM Reply
its cute .7
[4] darkhelmet10 27-Oct-02/5:21 AM Reply
good content but could use more of a rythmic feel
[1] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/7:12 PM Reply
I thought you made tons of porn movies and died??? But you really went underground to practice your poetry??
[3] deleted user 1-Nov-02/7:23 PM Reply
You have even stanzas, but the lines are a bit lenghty. When writing about a such a popular subject it's important to keep your language fresh, avoiding cliches (I know that word is a cliche itself).
[8] Dreammaker1024 7-Nov-02/6:35 PM Reply
It is a very well written poem and also sweet. At parts you flowed very nicely then you broke up. But it was very good.
[7] Britpop 11-Nov-02/6:03 AM Reply
Really enjoyed that. thanks
[3] Tascobar 15-Nov-02/4:50 AM Reply
Aaaaaaah. I can feel my heart melting. 3. Less of a poem, more a plot line on a crappy, low-budget US sitcom.
[0] Caducus 22-Nov-02/6:34 AM Reply
Oh dear - you can do better,
heart is the right place, but the poems in the wrong place.
[0] deleted user 23-Nov-02/3:53 AM Reply
oh please isckly sentimental, burn it adn be done with it, love is the root of unhappiness
[3] ciantu 23-Nov-02/10:35 PM Reply
nice