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Free verse № 138467

Faith on a cross

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Feb 2006 · 4 comments

The opus of grief left her lungs and the lash blackened river wrote on her face what my lips failed to do. I am your pale table you threw aside like Jesus a leper of your loving who raised you like Lazarus and now you thread thorns polish silver platters and climb the Judas tree not scared to leap to death yet so fuckin scared in life. Woodwinds and thunder Seraph snake in Jew cloth I am flesh and wrath dust and splinter found in two blue eyes that grieved for me this winter.

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[9] Dovina 7-Feb-06/12:09 PM Reply
I like the Judas tree reference. The name derives from the tradition that Judas Iscariot hanged himself from this tree, and when it's in bloom, it blushes with shame every year.
[8] Ranger 9-Feb-06/6:57 AM Reply
A very angry Cohen. Nice.
[7] wilco 9-Feb-06/4:20 PM Reply
Not as good as the one i just read...but not bad.
[9] Glasseyez 9-Feb-06/9:27 PM Reply
That was good I like the visuals I get from this