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Free verse № 1395

swimming

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · Edited 14 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

Night sea -- still against those swimming beneath a playful moon, withered away from hours relegated to water. Once sad morning dawns we dress, Minding the sunshiny sky.

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[7] limonade 30-May-02/9:34 PM Reply
sunshiny isn't very poetic.