poemranker ::Into the Shadows I Crawl by Silverjackel

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Free verse № 139706

Into the Shadows I Crawl

by Silverjackel

Member since 2006 · Posted 26 Feb 2006 · 2 comments

Into the shadows I crawl, Your deepest secret I can see, And this aggravates me And builds my character. Hidden far from your eyesight, I feed off your emotions, And when I feel the time is right, That is when and only when I strike Like a leopard with foot long claws. And when my damage has been done, I hide again and leave you to blame. Naughty, naughty, it wasn’t me, For I am Anger and you see, You cannot control me.

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[6] MacFrantic 26-Feb-06/10:58 AM Reply
Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
[7] Dovina 27-Feb-06/6:26 PM Reply
The title should be "Anger" or somesuch, I think. Why would "this aggravates me" be true? Otherwise good.