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I’m unsaid and dead

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Mar 2006 · 6 comments

I’m unsaid and dead How could it happen? No word can express No world can understand How did I drop tears upon the last hope? How less I effort to put the pain away? How bitter I’ve ended up in the dead end Since the thing’s became absurd Now I m absurd as well Age of hopeless end’s approaching me How and where and who can answer The numberless questions will fall at the end of me They can’t say how and why All worlds are absurd By the moment dies in my emptiness The kind of emptiness deserts all-end...all ends

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[5] Dovina 10-Mar-06/3:36 PM Reply
How uplifting this is! You cannot imagine how words like "I drop tears upon the last hope," tears of joy upon realizing hope's fulfillment. And "How less I effort to put the pain away," just shows the pain-relieving medicine of a happy soul. Yes, "All words are absurd" in such happiness.
[n/a] Ranger › Dovina 10-Mar-06/3:45 PM Reply
Albert would have been dismayed.

Remember Sisyphus!
[5] Dovina › Ranger 10-Mar-06/3:54 PM Reply
From Homer, Sisyphus was the wisest and most prudent of mortals because he rolled a stone up a hill only to watch it roll back down. But I think Homer was wrong because by that standard, the writing of poetry wiser and more prudent.
[n/a] Ranger › Dovina 10-Mar-06/3:59 PM Reply
Yeah, I was thinking more along the lines of Camus though, as I'm assuming that's where our Prince of Void was drawing his inspiration from.
All that 'absurdity' nonsense. Tch.
[n/a] Ranger › Dovina 10-Mar-06/3:46 PM Reply
Great comment, by the way!
[n/a] Prince of Void › Dovina 11-Mar-06/10:41 AM Reply
that's true...it must go on