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Free verse № 140575

i prefer steadfast

by skaskowski

Member since 2001 · Posted 12 Mar 2006 · 3 comments

rather be a store front when a storm front shuts it down. pull in my pottery; blue tarp and sandbag, bolted to the ground. let the ocean wrap me up and rinse away all my graffiti. fill all the pots with salty broth, sand bust out swirling 'round.

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[9] faithmairee 12-Mar-06/11:52 AM Reply
I enjoyed this alot. It was very interesting and had a nice flow to it.
[9] Niphredil 12-Mar-06/12:36 PM Reply
I love visualizing poems, and this one ain't no exception. It's beautiful.
[8] Ranger 15-Mar-06/7:47 AM Reply
Very smooth, the title says it all. 'Let the ocean wrap me up and rinse away all my graffiti' - excellent.