poemranker ::Happy Birthday Satou by raven_the_poet

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Free verse № 142028

Happy Birthday Satou

Member since 2006 · Posted 8 Apr 2006 · 1 comment

(Please don't take this seriously, it was just a gift.) Though all that you've been through these days Can add up to more than your age, You continue to walk on with pride And you still turn the page. I can't say much about myself Except that I can't even come close To the wonderful person I know that you are. But, I don't mean to boast. The greatest friend that one could have, That's your definition. And it seems that making people happy Is your ultimate mission. Today you should take it easy for once I'm sure, this we all know. And for today you'll hear us say Happy Birthday Satou!!

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[8] Ranger 9-Apr-06/9:07 AM Reply
Nice, I hope it was appreciated.