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Tang Soo Do See Do

by ecargo

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Apr 2006 · Edited 26 Apr 2006 · 3 comments

Low block front punch feint jab dance back high kick side kick tap block high dodge right spin kick sweep punch punch and duck dance in retreat not quick enough to block the kick a BURST a BLOOM bow out repeat

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[9] Ranger 26-Apr-06/11:39 AM Reply
Energetic - I felt the sharp breaths and sounds of martial artistry here. Is Tang Soo Do an offensive or defensive discipline?
I can't tell whether there's a definite object pictured here but I like the arrowing of it; conversely it also resembles the way the body folds if you've been hit in the stomach. The lines which 'stick out' a little also give the impression of speed lines.
Or it could be a top-down starship...
[9] Enkidu 27-Apr-06/8:43 PM Reply
Very original, very good. I was thoroughly entertained. *9*
[10] amanda_dcosta 29-Apr-06/12:03 PM Reply
ecargo... hmmm this is pretty good. Not particulary to my taste, but even then I think I must be frank and fair. You deserve a 10.

P.S. Ironically, this is the stuff I vote a zero here in my home. Punches and jabs..... I'm scared to see it physically, wondering when my kids (biggest kid - my husband) will end up with stitches (which is nothing new). An in the end my husband stands and bows pretending to be the winner among the lot. Proudly. :-)