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I'M

Member since 2006 · Posted 12 May 2006 · 1 comment

<I>I'M A LOADED GUN READY TO BE FIRED ..............</I> <I>I'M THAT FANTASY READY TO BE DESIRED....</I> <I>I'M THE TEARS THAT FALL FROM YOUR EYES...</I> <I>I'M THE CONFLICT AND ALL THE LIES.</I> <I>I'M THE CARING AND THE PAIN...........</I> <I>I'M THE INNER FORCE THAT DRIVES YOU INSANE....</I> <I>I'M THE CONFUSION THAT DWELLS IN YOUR HEAD...</I> <I>I'M THE WORDS THAT YOU YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE SAID</I> <I>I'M THE HAND THAT PUSHES EVERYTHING AWAY.</I> <I>I'M THE DARK CLOUDS YOU LET DARKEN YOUR DAY.....</I> <I>I'M THE CHOICES THAT YOU MAKE.</I> <I>I'M THE LOVE AND ALL THE HEARTACHE....</I> <I>I WILL BE THERE WHEN YOU REACH YOUR FATE..</I> <I>FOR, I'M THE PERSON WHO YOU CREATE.</I>

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[0] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/4:49 PM Reply
awful.