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Looking Up, Seeing Grey (Free verse) by Enkidu
In the right lane percussion In the left lane discussion I passed a flock of penguins going east I delivered a death blow to the stormy beast If each spot of thunder strikes If clouded lightning likes I'll commiserate with your walls I'll debate your maddened squalls


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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11432
Posted: June 6, 2006 11:42 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2006 11:42 AM PDT
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