poemranker ::Get Over It by drnick

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Free verse № 144626

Get Over It

by drnick

Member since 2005 · Posted 17 Jul 2006 · 4 comments

no finer eye liner make-up, jeans designer I could try to find a minor to dig for my emotions but they're already on table emo = unstable look at my hair how I try not to care yet another corporate fad grow up and hug your dad

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A favorite of Ranger.

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[9] Ranger 17-Jul-06/2:22 PM Reply
One of the best I've read for months. Catchy, great rhyming, and an excellent punch at the end. Favourited.
[7] Dovina 17-Jul-06/2:38 PM Reply
I like the rhyme, the brevity, and her eye-liner. What I don't get is whether the sloppy hair is yours or hers. Doesn't matter, I suppose, a fad is a silly fad.
[n/a] drnick › Dovina 20-Jul-06/8:00 AM Reply
Interesting that you assume I'm speaking of a girl. While it may seem that way, with the way "emo" kids look, I think it could be interpreted either way. I was assuming the role of the emo person who has the hair you speak of. Perhaps if I disconnected the last two lines it would be more apparent?
[8] amanda_dcosta 18-Jul-06/5:44 AM Reply
The rhyming is good... and also the last lines. This time I see that you have a title for your poem.