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hypnotic spell

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jul 2006 · 0 comments

come under this hypnotic spell with me; forget who you were and everything you know. we'll start again, from whence began, a fresh path lain ahead; take a stroll and watch the sky, get lost inside ourselves. a new air, crisp and clean, soothing all our sighs, breathing in perfection as the calm rests our weathered minds. so join me in this hypnotic spell; let's build something new. forget the past and look ahead to a brightness we never knew.

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