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flow-charts

by FreeFormFixation

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Aug 2006 · 2 comments

Kids these days... The elbow craze, line up and rub a star. But just stay lazy. Sleep, my baby. Kids these days have jobs and cars. I see myself reflected there, (all silver dipped in lard). Super-shiny, spoilt and whiny. Kids these days are smart!

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[10] MacFrantic 12-Aug-06/1:00 AM Reply
Ha! "Flows" perfectly. A wonderful statement. Especially liked the last three lines. Kudos.
[9] leonxic 12-Aug-06/6:30 PM Reply
Very nice.