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Free verse № 145257

The Pole and the Shadow

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Aug 2006 · 2 comments

A power pole shadow streaks the sidewalk, until the curb jags it like lightning, and pavement bends it like a sickle— portentous, foreshadowing. Obedient to rules, accurate in every respect, shadows move under cars, lurk in alleys, darken moon, darken night— ominous, definitive, satisfying interpretative minds with terrible creativity. And truth fades in another light, while trust is a bolt, holding cross arm to pole.

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A favorite of Crakyamuni.

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[9] amanda_dcosta 18-Aug-06/9:57 AM Reply
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
[10] Crakyamuni 20-Aug-06/4:07 PM Reply
This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you