poemranker ::it's quiet by hendrimike

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it's quiet

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Aug 2006 · 0 comments

i see you in my dreams a flowing dance of hair and arms i see you in my dreams, my dear your beauty resonates 'neath the stars i'm tired of writing about a wish i want reality to hit i want a girl who isn't afraid i want a girl who isn't tied to games i want a girl unlike all the same but she's there in my head a neon fantasy cast in my brain she is unlike all the same jump right in why not? give it a shot why not? i am the man that holds happiness i will treat you right dinner by the candlelight a laugh and a goodnight i can be whatever you need me to be but i'd rather just be me this is how i picture it in my head this is how i wish it could be moonlight masquerading peacefully playing with your contours slowly outlining your every move dance girl swirl take my hand and twirl when i feel the explosion of emotions it helps when i compose the commotion but i fear that when it's read it conflicts with the true energy that i'm willing to emit it's all just a poem that i write when it's really, really late in the night a dream girl in my head that i concoct that i wish only lived 'round the block

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