Curse

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

Circular thoughts put into a line The thoughts put down don`t match mine I can't say what I need you to hear Words say so much less than this love and fear Love doesn`t say all I feel at the time My fear can`t be put in a simple rhyme A poet`s love passes paper and pen A poet`s craft fails him again Failed letters of love scrached through So many failed tries at telling you Broken pencils and a poet`s cusre What he feels most fits no verse

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[9] Katie 13-Sep-02/8:54 AM Reply

=) I like it, not complicated, but yet it's still a wonderfull poem, cootos!! 9/10 =)

[7] [mojo] 13-Sep-02/2:57 PM Reply

Pleasant enough. Couple of typos.7.

[9] horus8 20-Dec-02/4:05 PM Reply

line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??

[10] Emotionz 9-Jan-03/3:30 AM Reply

Wicked

[0] razorgrin 13-Feb-03/12:56 PM Reply

Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!