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SLIM JIM

by PodPoet

Member since 2005 · Posted 8 Sep 2006 · 3 comments

Slim Jim stands so tall Slim Jim gonna take a bad fall Slim Jim's pants are so straight Never change color on any given day Slim Jim gonna rule the world Til the day bodies are hurled Slim Jim can't save them now But only stand and wonder how Slim Jim's gonna save the day With two airplanes gone astray Slim Jim didn't see 'em coming Slim Jim couldn't escape 'em running Slim Jim stood so tall Til the bodies began to fall

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[8] nypoet22 9-Sep-06/3:40 AM Reply
i don't get it.
[1] Edna Sweetlove 23-Sep-06/7:21 PM Reply
Illiterate and unamusing. I have read better things in a fortune "cookie".
[8] nypoet22 24-Sep-06/8:06 PM Reply
wait, i get it now. it's a 9/11 poem! jeez.

still a little inane to conceptualize it this way... but i have to admit it's substantially more clever than i initially thought.