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Ode № 145903

The Ice Soldier

by MacFrantic

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Sep 2006 · 2 comments

He fell apart during the war He collapsed in the midst of a score And his eyes became mirrors of red That reflect frozen eyes of the dead His gun melted out of his hands His clothing still rests in the sand O ice soldier see What becomes of thee And I'm sure you'll be But a memory MacFrantic 9/11/06

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[n/a] Mr Pig 13-Sep-06/4:55 AM Reply
I was expecting he would have ended up as water.
[8] Ranger 13-Sep-06/10:17 PM Reply
Good grief, Mac - I looked up to see a gathering of 5 users online...4 of which are you! New record, methinks. How's Colorado?