poemranker ::if really its me by Landon2

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Free verse № 146437

if really its me

Member since 2006 · Posted 20 Sep 2006 · 4 comments

sometimes i feel ive lost my mind, the truth of my identity i just cant seem to find, buried deep in the sea lies my true self, but i bury it deeper trying to gain recgonition and wealth, ive put who i am on the very top shelf, and dusted off the identity of everyone else, ive shot a hole through my soul, im my charecter but play a someone elses role, in my eyes i cant just see, everyday i look in the mirror and wonder if its really me.

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4 comments

[n/a] Ranger 21-Sep-06/2:35 AM Reply
Could do with a run through the spellcheck.
[6] pete 21-Sep-06/5:30 PM Reply
know the feeling :)! ... reads like it should be spoken over beats. If not, i'd introduce more rests and split some lines into 2 or 3 .....
[6] pete › pete 21-Sep-06/5:31 PM Reply
sorry, that score should read a 6
[1] Edna Sweetlove 23-Sep-06/7:16 PM Reply
Illiterate garbage.