Solving Freud's Conflict (not a weather poem)

by nypoet22

Member since 2006 · Posted 24 Sep 2006 · 4 comments

Later or sooner, spring bed, flower bed, we will all sleep together.

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[9] Dovina 24-Sep-06/7:40 PM Reply

Freud has been a called a man with "a whole climate of opinion." - WH Auden. So you have written a Freudian weather poem. Admit its inevitability.

Death solves many conflicts, and our atoms mix eventually with those we hate. Best not to hate; maybe that's what you;re saying. Good poem.

[n/a] nypoet22 › Dovina 27-Sep-06/5:29 PM Reply

thanks. it's a cute little pun but i tried to get all the mileage i could out of it. auden was a genius. freud was no slouch either, come to think, though most of the time he was coked off his hiney.

[9] Ranger 27-Sep-06/3:28 PM Reply

Excellent.

[8] richa 29-Jan-07/1:04 PM Reply

Cute.