Haiku № 147124
weather poem part 3: the hurricane (renga)
Everyone mentions
the weather; the wind calls back
cracks and fells branches.
Each day branches, grows
moments tethered to your heart,
flows in the stiff breeze.
Breezes carry drawn
scenes to the eyes you stare through
before loves shatter.
Limbs shatter and fall,
sneer, snicker, sheath their leaved grins
beneath cracked windshields.
Trucks hide their windshield
faces kissing trees with tongues
dampened in dewdrops.
Dewdrops wake the day
like a strewn palm frond fallen
on a slalomed street.
The hurricaned street
punished, pounded with shouting
children in her ears.
Cover ears with palms
mouth jacked open, jawbone set
the storm will find you.
You will stand speechless
waiting, mouthing words written
on a paper soul.
Your soul, a willow,
lowers her head, locks hanging
over hiding eyes.
And don't your eyes hide
some mischievous greatness hatched
from the egg carton?
Chicks, cartons of smokes,
nicotine working the room,
grinning like white wine...
Wham! Thud. Wine is blood
aged fine like a drunk Jesus
munching matzah balls.
Balls-up bitten kid
falls off his board, skins his knee,
lies flat on the walk.
Flocks of ducks follow,
walk in his wake, hunt for crumbs
to find his way home.
There his home is your
heart piping, gushing red gold
in racetrack circles,
Five hundred circles
follow cars in flowing waves
that shoot through your veins.
Veins on the train tracks
fight to hold moments, heading
for that same railyard.
The railyard in late
November makes thanksgiving
for each day living.
Know that living is
the present, gifted each day
and remembered less.
Less worth valued more
is the way our days progress;
so goes inflation.
Inflation balloons
from latex orbs at parties,
rises to the sky.
A dusk sky yawning
tastes of peach and magenta,
nectar on her claws.
Desire's claws sharpened
by each stare, each wayward glance
held to the grindstone,
Stone and flesh meet hard,
come together with a crack
of cane freshly cut.
We play a cut scene
of writing by candlelight;
the power is out.
Night creatures come out,
the walls glow red with shadow
dipped in God's own dark.
Sweet dark breaks apart
mangled by a brash, buzzing
gas generator.
Generator bits
burn, bumble, hum some old tune
too soon forgotten.
I have forgotten
where this hurricane began,
lost in the moment.
Keep this moment please
protract its heart in your heart
and remember me.
Hear me call your name
softly in the silent dark,
wait, hold me, stop, stay.
Shadows just stay here
waiting, watching, hungering
to breathe in your arms,
Asleep in your arms,
frozen in your eyes; goodbye,
the eye of my storm.
Twenty-three storms break
swarm the Gulf with a rumble
with a flash and crack.
Branches crack and fall
the wind calls back; the weather
mentions everyone.
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I like the way ending thoughts lead to starting thoughts and back to the weather.
the first 8 stanzas are described as a party's beginning, a somewhat formal introduction; the middle 20-ish are like the heart of the party where you loosen up a little; the last 6-8 are like the party's end, clearing things up and getting ready to go home. when done as a group, each poet adds a verse and passes it on to the next.
http://www.ahapoetry.com/ahalynx/213sym.
September's slow, soft
Caterpillar rain-crawl down
the last gold oak leaves
A stiff gust of autumn tugs
at dried brittle summer moons(jle)
In the meantime:
Flower of the moon
lies, wilted, on a moss-sprung
mattress strewn with twigs
the parched wood, to warm our hands.
(note, in an autumn kasen renga, stanzas 5-6 are about winter)
a hibernating squirrel
dreams of maple buds
she will holds what snowfall comes
fences ringing fallow fields
The surface unturned
what she can to build her home
Before the chill falls
we make autumn love
to whispered songs
http://www.ahapoetry.com/rengfmau.htm
Deep in this warm bed, like seeds
Stepped-on, mucked-up, matted,
packed in sod
(that was verse 11; almost 1/3 done)
Snaking slowly from the womb
Time to see a seasonal lunar shape, right? Any other poets wanting to join in this little project, feel free (check the link above to get the pattern).
hangs amniotic, Selene
over the summer sky
gather sweets for winter treats
-they scatter. Haze is broken
by rusty stormclouds
the ground like grease on a frypan
(remember, the next one's a spring and flower image)
from a flooded tomb they march
to the bluebells' chime
See their shadows and go back down
Punxsutawney's never been wrong
will waken hungering,
harvest gone to green
cherry blossom's pale splendour
burst, roll, touch, tickle palates
bred pink to hold them
Feasting ants and wasps arrive
Await snow for snow angels,
mourn the shrinking sun.
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