To My Love

by Lola

Member since 2006 · Posted 11 Oct 2006 · 7 comments

All I can say is I love you. No promises. No demands. No conditions. But a life time of never ending love for you.

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[8] Ranger 11-Oct-06/1:50 AM Reply

Sweet and concise, he's very lucky :-)

[n/a] Lola › Ranger 12-Oct-06/12:26 AM Reply

Thank you Ranger.

[7] Dovina 11-Oct-06/10:20 AM Reply

I would question whether "no promises" weakens this love, and conflicts with "never-ending."

[n/a] Lola › Dovina 12-Oct-06/12:11 AM Reply

No promises means 'I won't promise to love him the way he wants me to'.... but all the same I will love him with a never ending love..'my way'.

[n/a] drnick 11-Oct-06/11:45 AM Reply

Now, lola, I'm going to be quite critical on this poem...not because I don't like you, but because you can do better than this.

When you touch on the 'ol lovey-dovey subject we're gonna need something to wow us as the subject is way to common. In this, I get nothing I couldn't get from some cheesey pop song. I'll give you that it seems genuine, but we need something of substance here (i.e. literary devices).

p.s. love sucks.

[n/a] Lola › drnick 12-Oct-06/12:13 AM Reply

Thanks drnick. I get what you're trying to tell me. I appreciate it.

[8] pollywolly 12-Nov-06/12:20 PM Reply

i like this short piece. has the lines "no promises, no demands" which are also lyrics from a song on the topic of love with no promises, nice