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snot

Member since 2006 · Posted 11 Oct 2006 · Edited 13 Oct 2006 · 3 comments

last night in my nostrel i felt a clot it turned out to be a really sticky snot it took ages to remove as it was caught in the matted nose hairs

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[6] pete 11-Oct-06/1:55 PM Reply

started out as yet another edna yet the final line shows a true poetic sensibility ... what else ya got, dude ?

[4] Dovina › pete 13-Oct-06/3:42 PM Reply

I disagree, it's no better than Edna.

[7] Edna Sweetlove 18-Oct-06/1:08 PM Reply

This showed considerable promise until that 4th line.

I suggest the last line should read:

"in the matted nose hairs i clipped so short"

And you spell nostril with an "i", dearie.