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Free verse № 147300

Soy Flat White with One

by helenwales

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Oct 2006 · 5 comments

A Sargasso Sea of innumerable worlds, Floating aboard this paper cup. Lit by the neon glow of the monitor, And a acrid smell so familiar, A life buoy with hard shards sent to ruin it all.  

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5 comments

[n/a] piedle 11-Oct-06/10:17 PM Reply
what's with the despair?
[n/a] helenwales › piedle 11-Oct-06/11:03 PM Reply
I live in this really awful share house...
[8] nypoet22 12-Oct-06/6:22 PM Reply
minor grammar correction: _an_ acrid smell.

otherwise, i like it.
[7] Shuushin 13-Oct-06/12:26 PM Reply
Computer generated? if so - a nine, otherwise (not)
[n/a] helenwales › Shuushin 14-Oct-06/10:58 PM Reply
Computer generated? Is that possible?