poemranker ::tormented suspicion by pollywolly

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Free verse № 148035

tormented suspicion

Member since 2006 · Posted 12 Nov 2006 · 1 comment

hidden depths of my mind brings forth tears to the eyes weeping the sad song which plays in my heart the song filled with sorrow of pain and of hurt making me want to just cut cut cut

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[7] howl 15-Nov-06/1:40 PM Reply
replace 'brings forth tears/ to my eyes' with 'brings forth tears/ to my bum'