Come Back to Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

I don't know how to tell you The way that I'm feeling My heart is broken And it is just not healing Because every thought I have Is about the way you smile But you're so far away Three hundred lonely miles I've fallen in love Though I tried to resist But you touched my heart The moment we kissed You whispered in my ear The soft words you spoke You held me as I slept You kissed me as I woke You touched me so gently And held me so tight I was floating on air My heart was so light Then you had to leave me And you kissed me good-bye My heart felt so empty And I tried not to cry And now you are gone My love can't you see What I'm trying to say Is come back to me

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4 comments

[9] Katie 13-Sep-02/8:38 AM Reply

!! love it, it's cute, but not complicated, there's some parts I would fix, but besides that I love it! 9/10!! =)

[n/a] horus8 20-Dec-02/4:14 PM Reply

i should of finger banged you harder, but with my cactus, and a handful of dry mud. three hundred miles? that's not love sweety that's a mild crush. love, is a talking brain tumor and a late cable bill w/ a bit of movie popcorn in your hair..

[7] Bill Z Bub 20-Dec-02/5:15 PM Reply

ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.

[2] -=SeTTle=- 3-Jan-03/5:41 PM Reply

why not...write a poem about it?