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The Glass Bees

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Dec 2006 · 1 comment

Women speak of concubines. Men warp the bedroom vines. The glass bees are shivers and the ceiling is a river. Hellos beget regretful goodbyes. We are unprepared motion; a bright mechanical triumph. This, a local infestation, where viruses become dark salts and spread veins on our foreheads. The subtle grain is ripe. Showers shed convalescent light and these white waters reflect centuries of distress. I pull glass stingers from the headboard while you rise like smoke from the bed. A morning bell sings rhapsody for dawn.

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[9] deleted user 5-Dec-06/9:02 PM Reply
This is good--the imagery and metaphors--I really like the last stanza.