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Member since 2007 · Posted 16 Jan 2007 · 0 comments

If you're gonna lie to me, At least try to make sense. If you gotta break my heart, Could you pick up the pieces? If you're gonna leave me hanging, Could you give me something to hold? If you've gotta push my love away, Please don't leave me in the cold. So now I lie on the ground, Out in the pouring rain. As the tears falling from my eyes Try to relieve this pain. Starring up into the heavens, Remembering the past, How stupid was I to think It was really going to last. Loving you with all my heart, And getting nothing back. It's like a slap in the face, Because of something I lack. Knowing nothing I say or do, Will turn your eyes towards me. And with that knowlege I'll stand up, And know that I can leave.

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