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Free verse № 149411

Menopause

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Jan 2007 · 7 comments

Flaps, Lapse.

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7 comments

[n/a] Ranger 30-Jan-07/7:16 AM Reply
Do you really need the comma?
[n/a] Ranger › Ranger 30-Jan-07/7:51 AM Reply
Oh, it's the pause. Gotcha.
[2] xxx › Ranger 30-Jan-07/7:51 AM Reply
Without the comma,
It does not work,
The genius is in the generosity of that comma!
[n/a] Ranger › xxx 30-Jan-07/7:52 AM Reply
I just worked that one out, right this second ;-)
[n/a] Stephen Robins › Ranger 31-Jan-07/5:28 AM Reply
Are you flirting with rockmage?
[n/a] ecargo 30-Jan-07/7:41 AM Reply
Pleas.
ap[p]les, alps
flop, slap.
eap.
[n/a] Stephen Robins › ecargo 30-Jan-07/9:06 AM Reply
Thanks.