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Free verse № 1502

the only square cloud

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 2 comments

the only square cloud i have seen is your suspended bed drifting within stepladder range. you dragged me aboard and we spent the afternoon playing two naked angels taking a tumble, heading for a fall. we spent the evening sharing the same rosey breath, knitting our eyelashes and weaving our hair until we slept. we climbed down in the morning much later than our waking, ex-angels joining the world. tender feet on solid ground, we tethered your cloud for keeping for the afternoons.

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[9] horus8 11-Jul-02/12:34 AM Reply
Sunshine daydreams
[7] ThoughtfulSoul 1-Aug-02/9:32 PM Reply
i love the talk of sex without actually sex talk