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Inside

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Desperation inside Like a pile of snakes Slithering and coiling Hissing for attention In a field of beautiful flowers Loneliness inside Like a sea of endless flame Burning with the suffocating agony of my life Sorrow inside Like an abandoned child Searching through the broken pieces of his shattered dreams

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[2] pete 14-Sep-02/12:28 AM Reply

is you xbsx ? or the new beat generation emerging ? ..... do i care ? ..... 2

[7] Bachus 14-Sep-02/2:13 AM Reply

i like how you throw the "his" in at the end. takes the attention off of you. 7/10.I

[0] razorgrin 28-Oct-02/1:08 PM Reply

Kill yourself. Pleeease. Believe me, the world would be better without you and no one would miss you.

[10] ciantu 5-Dec-02/2:34 PM Reply

nice