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Free verse № 15037

Lonely

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

Painful, but feels right as i start to cry, Everything in my life has been a lie. No one cares but my friends As i lay thinking how it ends Hate me for the way i dress For freedom of expression is a lie, I try to do it less As a tear rolls down my eye Is this how its going to end All i remember is drops of red Lonely is what i am And nobody gives a damn

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[3] pete 14-Sep-02/12:23 AM Reply
that'as what friends are for ..... a good cry is great but self pity in a poem doesn't do it .. 3