poemranker ::snacktime by jesslew

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Free verse № 150868

snacktime

Member since 2007 · Posted 13 Mar 2007 · 2 comments

little ray of sunshine oh how i love snacktime everyone needs potassium bananas are edible smiles they last with you for miles

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[7] richa 13-Mar-07/12:11 PM Reply
Don't like the last line. Like the whimsy of 'bananas are edible smiles' and the idiosyncrasy of 'everyone needs potassium.
[7] Ranger 13-Mar-07/1:48 PM Reply
Cute, richa's right about the last line though. Pick something less bland to say.