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Free verse № 151

My Dark

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 2 comments

My passion burns bright- Deep within me. Glowing, Grabbing at me, Tearing me apart. Pulling me farther in- Looking for an escape from this my dark side. I seek to find normalcy I yearn to find simplicity. Stuck in this deep dark world. The admiration of many will not let me be comforted. They yearn for the night in me. To take them to unimaginable places. Places their minds' will not let them stay for long. It is so lonely here. With only words and twisted thoughts for friends. Alas, it is here I have to wait. In the constant struggle to not be myself, To deny the side that takes me. Just waiting to relinquish control.

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[3] ErgoErgun 16-May-02/9:24 AM Reply
Cut out the unecessary crap.
[7] Holden 23-Jul-02/10:46 AM Reply
Dark, deep and vivid- Good.