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Why

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Mar 2007 · 0 comments

I feel so alive Yet so empty inside a knot in my gut Are my legs like rubber and my brain in a fog Does my spirit soar And make me giddy inside and Then drop to where I feel so lonley I want to die I feel so incomplete As if my soul has taken flight leaving me half a man I look into her brown eyes with their healing power I'm calm except for a racing heart I'm at peace the knot melts away My soul is whole again We have become one flesh one being The words flowing the mind inmeshed.

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