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No sally, lay your troubles to bed

by Crakyamuni

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Sep 2002 · Edited 4 Jan 2005 · 10 comments

Table dance sally singing softly to mourning listens to raindrops

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[2] horus8 14-Sep-02/7:37 PM Reply
unfortunately even the wise fat crosslegged one couldn't help this...better just go with satanmonk, or the inevitably vague and stronger monkfish. cereal dish? nay, nay! cereal is for bowls you twanker. 2/10.
[1] god'swife 15-Sep-02/1:10 PM Reply
Oh worshipper of the sacred Budda, go back to the creamery. What this is is what it was and shall forever be, caca.
[2] Dark Angle 5-Oct-02/12:43 AM Reply
i used to write like this, then i realized how retarded it is and was was and i got better to be seen without not being and everyone saw how it was with the light of what was and what is and what the fuck am i saying
[8] jsab78 8-Oct-02/12:27 AM Reply
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
[7] Nicholas Jones 12-Oct-02/6:40 AM Reply
Have you been reading T.S. Eliot?
[3] RGallet 7-Jan-03/7:55 PM Reply
not enuf they're
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 19-Jan-03/11:24 AM Reply
Exactly.
[n/a] Crakyamuni › <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Jan-05/8:55 AM Reply
I fixed it bitches
[n/a] Shuushin › Crakyamuni 4-Jan-05/6:34 PM Reply
What did this look like before?
[n/a] Crakyamuni › Shuushin 5-Jan-05/2:56 PM Reply
like the common ranting in seventeen pieces.