poemranker ::Divorce by timvick473662003

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Haiku № 151474

Divorce

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Apr 2007 · 1 comment

Both Start seperatly Together you become one She takes all your stuff

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[7] Dovina 16-Apr-07/6:56 PM Reply
Wouldn't it mean the same if you shortened it:

Start separately
Become one
She takes all your stuff

But then it wouldn't be 5-7-5. Pity.