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Free verse № 151512

Always there

Member since 2007 · Posted 17 Apr 2007 · 7 comments

I don’t think things are working out and the ride is starting calmly now but every roller coaster has its turns and after every turn comes its ups and downs and when its over it starts all over again so put your hands up and ride with me don’t let your fears take you off you know its ok to cry all the while and when we’re falling down scream and shout but make the most of it all the way down and when its over ill still hold your hand but if we don’t make it ill still be here and this wonderful view might only last a bit but when im here with you it’s a second of the best and when its over it starts all over again so put your hands up and ride with me and when its over ill still hold your hand but if we don’t make it we’ll start again

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7 comments

[n/a] holliebollie_19 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[n/a] holliebollie_19 17-Apr-07/3:57 PM Reply
It is sort of like a song.
[10] Stephen Robins 19-Apr-07/8:55 AM Reply
Hollie Bollie, this is indeed sort of like a song. It is sort of like a song before it is sung.
[7] half.italian 19-Apr-07/7:11 PM Reply
Kinda nice.
[4] Sasha 22-Apr-07/5:35 AM Reply
cliché