witch's bliss

Member since 2001 · Posted 15 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

she hunts the night through star-filled skies tempting devils and killing little white lies she wears all the angels as good luck charms she stones the moon and gathers up the pieces in her arms inside the eclipse she conceals all her gifts all her most cherished possessions lie on her lips living dangerously and stealing bliss she holds all of heaven and gives it away in her kiss

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4 comments

[2] horus8 15-Sep-02/6:53 PM Reply

puppy chow. help your puppy live a healthier life. then take him for long walks in china town.

[0] poetandknowit 15-Sep-02/7:38 PM Reply

You are on a roll of goof poetry tonight. Keep it up! I laughed all the way through!

[7] renwick 15-Sep-02/10:18 PM Reply

I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.

[5] Tintagiles 22-Oct-02/11:44 AM Reply

'Killing little white lies...' I like that.