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Maybe Someday

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 May 2007 · 0 comments

I am munching on a cookie You look, and turn away The world spins on around me I mutter a phrase out of key It still feels the same today I am munching on a cookie The days turn themselves out on me The months the years the time The world spins on around me Chasing a dream I hardly know anything of You call me names and bruise my body I am munching on a cookie I sing a note, out of, beat So many faces smirk and stare The world spins on around me If it all made any sense, I hope I do make it clear to you, to you I am munching on a cookie. The world spins on around me

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