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Free verse № 152396

Temptation

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Jun 2007 · 1 comment

I feel like I'm on fire Not wanting to escape Your kiss is my desire Every moment I'm awake One touch ignites a flame Which leaves a burning sensation And I can not contain This lustful temptation

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[7] richa 16-Jun-07/2:30 PM Reply
lustful temptation? burning sensation? is this about VD.