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rear end of the storm

Member since 2007 · Posted 10 Jun 2007 · 2 comments

I danced outdoors to catch the rain Or bet that it wouldn't catch me. She said it'd rain soon but then you never think it will happen to you. Pearl grey skies, slight breeze, my first mile along the winding, snaking figure-8 road when the wind blasts with sound like waterfall or river through the trees. And I feel the first drops the downpour and big, brave me under a tree, watches Nature's shadowplay, Oklahoma drama and, during a station break, the rain slows and reprieved,walk on. Duck in again under another kind tree. Test the rain's resolve, beseach 'come on, enough already!' Walk another mile. Wet, soaked. I awake to take up where I left off...I danced outdoors to catch the rain. It caught me.

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[7] Dovina 11-Jun-07/2:39 PM Reply
Midwest rain will soak you this time of year, but it's a happy kind of soaking when the air is warm. At the front of the cloud is where the lightning lurks and where a lone cyclist or pedestrian sticks up like a rod to catch it, either that or the funnel.
[10] Skamper 11-Jun-07/4:11 PM Reply
Love the rain.