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The Buiness Card

by abecedarian

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Aug 2007 · 3 comments

blue pin stripes and a white collar under velvet coat of black and ruby in the dark barlight Tamp tie flung across and over a practiced flick of the wrist produce a card stock placard from his pocket 'wine importer and conniseur' __________ Character poem 1

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[8] richa 24-Aug-07/1:24 PM Reply
I like the way the words sound. Does he have to be illiterate it seems a bit of a cheap jibe.
[10] http://mulberryfairy › richa 24-Aug-07/2:59 PM Reply
Does poor spelling make him illiterate? That is such a constrictive definition of the word. If so, half of our fellow poets are. I think this is a real character who is being fairly and poetically represented.-10
[9] INTRANSIT 25-Aug-07/6:53 AM Reply
Duh, whassa Tamp tie ?