floored

Member since 2007 · Posted 5 Sep 2007 · 3 comments

[drip] [drip] [drip] warm yet cooling slow progression [drip] the path meanders down to not hell or purgatory or even [drip] limbo just the floor the bathroom floor where your life un-needed coagulates near dustbunnies lost hairpins and a toenail clipping polished purple

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[n/a] godspeed 5-Sep-07/11:20 AM Reply

This is a true story.
True.
I'm not sure whose, though

[7] richa 5-Sep-07/12:19 PM Reply

Poo does not coagulate. What are you some kind of dunce.

[n/a] godspeed › richa 7-Sep-07/11:27 AM Reply

yes, I am a dunce.