poemranker ::We - Who Work by Skamper

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Free verse № 154069

We - Who Work

Member since 2007 · Posted 13 Oct 2007 · 0 comments

green hangs another way while hard hats lay on booted heels - that tap on smoke butts awaiting wheels hand for life – waved drama over-played clapping skies lift circle past to swing (foot-stomp) shift each face split grinning spit awake and singing coughing ruptures I stand with them dodging vultures a line of cars comes to pass boots and shoes join the cue my life - I choose

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